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Perfection's Folly by ~Lucky--Me:iconLucky--Me:



A lone archer stands on a hill top. Tall and slender, his every aspect complement the trade that he has so religiously perfected. Accompanied only by a great willow, this instrument of annihilation, an emissary created in the image of a reflection in the river styx, stands poised in a position all to familiar to him. A vantage more natural than sleeping.

      To him breathing, and eating were efforts. But this, was perfection. He was at rest in his undertakings. Around him the heavens blaze, spiraling up and in as if the storm itself wished to experience the world from his eyes.

      Arrows slide through the warm gales separating soul from meat, as scores of men sank below the horizon. His eloquence shocking his attackers. Assailing onwards; no motion out of place, no exertion beyond his paragon art.

      And now, as the swords of his attackers sink into his flesh, the flesh of this artist, this tool; a wielder of such refined skills. Scores fell under him, yet his fate would eternally be the same. He was to fall in the reflection of his craft, for so long as he continued to hone his talents and produce such artistry in spite of himself, he immortalized himself as quintessentially flawed. As his pursuits ultimate artist he becomes its most powerful tool. He was no longer a masterful archer but now was archery's masterpiece.

      Perfect.

      Useless.
©2006-2009 ~Lucky--Me
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"'It is a balancing act and it is a dream. The more accurate the map, the more it resembles the territory. The most accurate map would be the territory, and thus would be perfectly accurate and perfectly useless.' from the notebook of Ibis"
- Neil Gaiman

This quote perfectly reflects the contraditions of subjectivity in speech, and symbols... the most accurate symbol/word, a shortcut to a greater and larger concept or entity is the concept or entity itself. Therefore useless as shortcut to expression the concept or entity.

This story reflects subjectiviy of roles in lives in this manner most literally

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Wow...that was beyond good. I'm at a loss of words, really. I could visualize everything you wrote and the tragedy in the whole thing. Well done!

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"Take time to laugh, it's the music of your soul."
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I like this, your point really gets across. So many points, really. Not many writers can do that in such a short amount of words.

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"I'm not enlightened. I don't know what I'm going to have for dinner tonight; I don't even remember what I had for breakfast this morning!" ~ Tenzin Gyatso, 14th Dalai Llama.
Thank you, I have only just recently be able to overcome my inability to write anything... I have a tendency to speak with too many minds. I have finally learned to focus on one and the rest often come through on there own. I am proud of this piece even if it was writen in only a few minutes and i look foward to writing much more.
Thanks for watching.

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-The only way to find true happiness is to risk being completely cut open.

-If you could be God's worst enemy or nothing, which would you choose?
Thank you, I have only just recently be able to overcome my inability to write anything... I have a tendency to speak with too many minds. I have finally learned to focus on one and the rest often come through on there own. I am proud of this piece even if it was writen in only a few minutes and i look foward to writing much more.
Thanks for watching.

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-The only way to find true happiness is to risk being completely cut open.

-If you could be God's worst enemy or nothing, which would you choose?
Muchas Gracias. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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-The only way to find true happiness is to risk being completely cut open.

-If you could be God's worst enemy or nothing, which would you choose?
sorry about the double reply, my comp. is acting wierd

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-The only way to find true happiness is to risk being completely cut open.

-If you could be God's worst enemy or nothing, which would you choose?
Oh very good!:clap: I also am impressed that I have found someone else who reads Neil Gaiman, amazing author. Neverwhere and Good Omens were fantastic.

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A man tells stories so many times that he becomes the stories.
They live on after him and in that way, he becomes immortal.
-Edward Bloom
What's funny is i read your main page before i read your comment and i was going to say the same thing about you, Neil Gaiman is amazing... and if you love his stuff another fantastic author to look out for is China Mieville, Perdido Street Station rivals Neverwhere in creativity but goes a few steps further in the fantasy dept.
Although Neverwhere was my intro. to Gaiman (and as such will always be god to me), I have to say that American Gods is, along with Stranger In A Strange Land by Heinlien, are my favorite book as of yet. If you haven't read it yet you are missing out on one of his best works... however if hyour like me you might need to do some research to brush up on your Eastern, Nordic, and Egyptian mythologies in order to get the plot points and general story.
I'm always in the mood to discuss lit. with anyone, poeple whom have heard of Gaiman seem to be rare at this point. Later.

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-The only way to find true happiness is to risk being completely cut open.

-If you could be God's worst enemy or nothing, which would you choose?
I think my first book of his was actually Coraline, a delightfully chilling little story, and i chosen it at random to read to my cousins first grade class. The results were rather funny, but i liked it a lot so I went and got his adult novels. Yes i read American Gods and was very pleased, being a fan of Norse mythology, i also liked Czernobog immensly. Have you read "Anansi Boys" yet? It's a spin off of sorts focusing a lot on the sons of Mr. Nancy, the african trickster god. very good.
I haven't heard of Perdido Street Station, or China Mieville, but if its even close to as good as Neverwhere, i'll have to look into it. Oh by the way, In Neverwhere four words...The Marquis de Carabas. Amazing character.
Another good book of his is well more of a collaboration with Terry Prachett called Good Omens. Later

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A man tells stories so many times that he becomes the stories.
They live on after him and in that way, he becomes immortal.
-Edward Bloom

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